Mind Map of Ideas for the Second Draft of the Screenplay
In order to further develop my screenplay for the second draft, I created a mind map. As a result of Jane Marlow's feedback, I thought about the different ways in which I could make Dorothy more interesting and not necessarily your stereotypical elderly lady. I also thought more about her background as an ex police officer and how I could further play this into the story. I wrote all of my thoughts down onto a piece of paper and then formulated them into a mind map. Through doing this, I was able to select the thoughts/ideas that I thought I could work and inputted them into the screenplay.
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